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June 18, 2013
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Let me first say that I really like this piece. I feel like you convey the idea of a youthful, cute, innocence without needing to sexualize a female character. The idea is called "Moe" in Japan and is invokes a sense of fatherly or big brotherly affection and a want to protect. So awesome work. Now as far as the critique portion it lays in the face, or more importantly her right eye (or her eye on the left side from the viewers perspective) Due to the catch-lights in the eyes (the light highlights) and the bangs it make her appear like she has a slight lazy eye. Like I mentioned it is slight, and only slightly detracts from a otherwise fantastic piece. Having looked at the piece a few times and measuring it by eye it seems that you have followed some form of ratio rule either through measuring or just by innate talent? So may I suggest opening the bangs a little? Even playing with the placement with the eye itself while it would mess up the symmetry would allow you to correct the appearance of the eye. One other suggestion would be to tilt her head slightly which would allow her hair to move to the left (viewers perspective) and open up her eye to correct the eye. Once again this is a fantastic piece and I am nit picking.
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ColorGush Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Omgg, I adore this! Love the colors <3 
Pastels and candy, my two favorite things. xD
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Bluemoons437 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like how it looks so soft
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scratch893 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014
What a pretty girl. 
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AbyLockhart Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the colors, the softness.
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Mireys Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Thanks!
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OginZ Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014
Pretty work! :)
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Chening Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014   Artist
у-у-у, милашка~
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Paru-chinBaka Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014
:D
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wakaflockaflame1 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I LUV it!
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enzouke Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013
She looks amazing<3
love how you colored her ; 7 ;
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